1. My paragraphs could be more clear 6. More expression
2. A better quotes 7. Better ending
3. Better explinations 8. Better word choice
4. better thesis 9. Need a theme
5. Have more voice 10. Better restatement of thesis
Please write any 15 thoughts about the book Slaughterhouse-5. For each thought, please refer to a specific part of the book that generated this thought (for instance, “It was funny” receives no credit; “It was funny when he described the Tralfamadorians” receives full credit).
1. The style of wrighting is intesesring thoughout the book.
2. It was funny when he discribed the Tralfamadorians
3. The style of wrighting is a new twist throughout the whole book
4. Blly's life never ends throughout the whole book
5. the book can get confusing
6. Some times you dont know where you are in the book
7. geared towards the generation of the 1960s and 1970s
8. more war than anti war like in the Dresden bombing
9. It has some very dark humor when they capture Ms.
10.Not what I expected, but that's not a bad thing
11. One of my favorite books because it was entertaining and interesting at the same time
12. A good read on a snowy night because it keeps you on you toes
13. It makes you want to read more like when he is at the work camp.
14. Is there such thing as free will
15. Is there really a forth demention
State 5 possible themes for the book Slaughterhouse-5.
1. That life after death is OK.
2. Life never dies you just keep reliving it.
3. The Destructiveness of War
4. The Illusion of Free Will
5. The Importance of Sight
Write a conversation between yourself and Billy Pilgrim in which he tries to teach you a lesson based on his own experiences. You must explain IN DEPTH at least 3 specific events and details from the book in order to receive full credit. This conversation should go on as long as it takes to demonstrate YOUR UNDERSTANDING of Billy’s experiences.
Billy: hello there
Eric: Hello whats your name
B: O im Billy
E: Hello Billy my name is Eric
I read a book a few days ago and it talked about Tralfamodorians do you know what they are?
B: not only do i know what they are i have visited their planet and met them
E: i don't believe you
B: well you should because i know they they don't have wars because they can concentrate on the good things in life. They also can see the forth demention which is time and can time travle
E: Wow that is simply amazing.
Thank you for this wonderful information.
